This was new. I had no idea that my staff was so powerful. I thought it was just a grey stick that only served the purpose of taking up space. Apparently, my staff could not only touch the ground, like any other staff, but it was apparently used by a miserable old wizard who used to abide in this castle. He made the staff so that it could command any thing. A man got attacked by a hyena one day, and I climbed over a rock and commanded it to stop. It went to go eat a sandwich after that.
As always, Danyal, your writing shows great imagination. Just be a little careful with your tenses: although writing in the present tense if often effective in a story you need to ensure that it follows logically. For example, at the beginning of your story, you effectively use the present tense, hooking your reader. However, it is then no logical for the event with the hyena to have happened in the past.
I always enjoy reading your work, Danyal. Keep it up.
Mrs T. 🙂